Imperfection

I am your average comic and manga reader. Nothing more. Can I do more? Well, I draw for sh*t, I can write for crap and I can send you as many similes as you want. So yeah. I am currently a English Major and Musical Theater Minor. I am writing a novel and working on a comic.... but the question is when will I be finished?! Well what can I say, I am a college student so night is day and day is night to me. I have studied Japanese for a year so I do know Japanese and Japanese culture. I am currently studying Kanji so I am beginning to read and write basic and common Japanese in its proper form and traditional form. I am a fantasy, supernatural and sci-fi writer. I love to describe the shit out of things and I love to create awesome characters with multiple layers and in difficult situations. When it comes to poetics, my teacher and class can vouch for me and say that I am a poetic writer. I mean look at this sentence alone... "The silent screams at the break of light, that ripples and fills the cracks and grooves of broken baby woman". Does this do me any good... well that's the real question isn't it?